War+with+Grandpa

Peter learned that war is not fun and that getting along can get you what you want. Grandpa learned that playing with your grandson is so much more fun than fighting with your grandson. If Peter didn't learn that war wasn't fun and that getting along gets you what you want, then the war would continue. If Grandpa didn't learn that playing with your garandson is more fun than fighting with our grandson, then Grandpa would keep fighting with Peter.

I think Grandma caused the war because if she had taken more care of herself she wouldn't have died in the first place. Then Grandpa wouldn't be lonely and he wouldn't come to Peter's house to live in Peter's room. It's also Grandpa's fault because if he was more careful while he was building he wouldn't have hurt his leg and then he could live in the guest room without having to limp down the stairs because, he wouldn't have a hurt leg.


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